Good use of white space and 2 column view. I like the borders around each sub section. Alternating color between heading and text is nice as well. I feel like the title should grab more attention, maybe underline it, make it larger, and/or pick a different font. Add your name, and that picture looks like flag football without the football lol.
Visuals are good. I'm not crazy about the font/color choice but that's probably just my personal opinion, looks good overall, a bit too much empty space though
The title is underwhelming as it is, and there is far too much awkward empty spots. Scale up the text boxes and photos or align them so they don't look like they are floating apart from each other like islands.
I think you have a lot of white space in your document, maybe try to add larger images to fill the space. I also feel the border around the text is not adding much to the piece.
Good use of white space and 2 column view. I like the borders around each sub section. Alternating color between heading and text is nice as well. I feel like the title should grab more attention, maybe underline it, make it larger, and/or pick a different font. Add your name, and that picture looks like flag football without the football lol.
ReplyDeleteAdd a little more "fluff". It drawl the eye more and grab more attention.
ReplyDeleteVisuals are good. I'm not crazy about the font/color choice but that's probably just my personal opinion, looks good overall, a bit too much empty space though
ReplyDeleteI like the cleanness of this. Maybe just fill up more of the white space though?
ReplyDeleteThe title is underwhelming as it is, and there is far too much awkward empty spots. Scale up the text boxes and photos or align them so they don't look like they are floating apart from each other like islands.
ReplyDeleteI think you have a lot of white space in your document, maybe try to add larger images to fill the space. I also feel the border around the text is not adding much to the piece.
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